Here is the first draft of the film's script:
Once this had been shown to the whole group, we each said what we thought could be improved. Different suggestions included:
- Adding a couple of extra scenes so that we had enough footage for it to last 5 minutes
- Making Hattie's character nicer to Simon, so that it isn't too predictable from the beginning
- Cut out some of the poem at the beginning - The joke can become tedious if overdone
Apart from these suggestions, I think we were all pretty happy with the result.
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