I think that a couple of elements could have been improved as listed in previous posts. I also think that a couple of shots that would have made our film better are:
- A Wide shot of the character walking towards the camera in the woods with the trees either side of him.
- A series of Close-ups of the character's face as he walks.
- An Extreme Close-up of his eyes as he looks at the gravestone.
- A Wide shot showing him walk into the graveyard from the entrance.
I am happy with the final result and now we just need to present it during tomorrow's seminar...
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