Edit Tutorial Feedback - 04/11/2011

During our tutorial where Dom viewed a rough cut of our film, the main issues that came up and need to be resolved are:

• To put all still's of the character facing the camera with changing backgrounds together and put as a sequence somewhere else within the film - We have decided to put these towards the beginning, to create a greater reasoning as to why the character is making the journey. 
• To alter the edits between the walking sequences, so that the camera doesn't show the view from an opposite angle. In turn giving the impression that he is walking in a different direction and making the audience feel like they are being taken out of their seats - We knew this was an issue already when making the rough cut. We plan to change this aspect by removing the shots and either making the footage longer or, though adding more close-ups to add more interest.
• To make it clearer at the beginning of the film where the character is walking to - We are going to resolve this by repeating a section of the graveyard scene that is shown at the end. This will help the audience to understand where the character is going throughout the film.